Maledictum Insania + Maledictum Insania: The Creation

Link to the story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1362/Maledictum-Insania

Since the original thread is gone along with the orcworm forums, I now have to recreated this here.
I would like to ask all of you to read my book.

I spent a good year developing the plot and another year writing the story.

The plot goes like this:

The land of Equestria has an ancient secret. Most of its subjects have forgotten what truly happened one thousand years ago, when Nightmare Moon tried to conquer the land. The only one who truly still knows of the consequences her rise had is Princes Celestia.

The story begins several years after all seasons of MLP:FIM ended and Celestia is ultimately forced into revealing the land's greatest secret to Twilight and her friends. A mighty and devestating curse called Maledictum Insania, the curse of madness.

Along with this revelation, Celestia sends a creature to the six keepers of harmony, which the ponies only heard faint rumors about and no one really believed they exist. Until now.

This creature shows them the full scale of this curse and guards them with his life, while at the same time, it seems to be following a twisted plan in the background, all in the name of Princess Celestia.

I put a whole lot of effort into it and I would hate to see the story die without any comments on it.

Please, you can trust me, it is a VERY good story. A little warning, though. It it is very, very brutal at times.

I also started on a prequel.




Link to the story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/54029/Maledictum-Insania%3A-The-Creation

The Creation tells the tale of how Luna became insane, Nightmare Moon was born and ultimately, how the curse of madness was created.

This as well is a grimdark story and will contain gore. Yet, I hope this does not repel you but rather makes you curious to explore this deep and sinister tale.

It also will be by far not as big in total size as MI was and it is fairly easy to read.

So please, give it a try.

oh god not again

_Brain_Dead_ wrote:oh god not again

Get over your rediciolous fear and enjoy the insanity and violence!
Seriously dude, I put so much effort into this story.

Since the original threat

Cant really advertise a story when your spelling is wrong in its own advertisement

Bubba_rocks wrote:Since the original threat

Cant really advertise a story when your spelling is wrong in its own advertisement

Oh im so sorry mr grammar nazi.
Did I offend your perspectives of written perfection?
Perhaps my battle axe can sort that problem of yours.

Ill get around to reading it tonight or tomorrow, depending on how my internet is (died last night) and if i can finish my homework

I realized I gave out far not enough information to really make anyone curious.
So I updated the original post, adding a little summary of what the story is about.
Please, feel free to comment.

That, or the fact that you never posted any updates on the story or your prequel

Well, as you suggested, I put both stories into one topic now.
I will also start announcing updates for my stories again.

Bravo my boy, bravo!
Though I think I may be the only one who is really active in this thread besides you...We'll see though
But for those who haven't check out his stories, their quite good, though they do start off a bit slow, and involve ponies.

thefluffyswan wrote:their quite good, though they do start off a bit slow

Well, I guess i should get to the matter much more quickly on Cupcake Factory then.

Update Time!

Gosh I can't believe how slow I am doing on MI:TC.
But finally, I found the needed time and words to complete chapter 4.

I think I once more outdid myself in terms of atmosphere and shock.
Just read it yourself!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18Ee-Abeg_BfY4zSAQu9nxP_o-iNGQgn4OvLov6k5HhA/edit

Update Time!

Alright, now that was a decent timing!
Here is chapter 5. Prepare for some nightmares!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kDyZL3U7AuQcjguTvF0KZiWFzFKEJ5YBBilivqww4-0/edit

Update Time!

Well along with the long awaited return of Trixie, I finished another chapter.
I am very curious to see how this whole Trixie incident will turn out.
In worst case, I would have to make some heavy adaptions to still stay accurate to the show with MI.

Anyway, here is the chapter:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o6zkI24wcAL5XYDccbkwHV5IwjCRVl_7Sg4PvTsd0XQ/edit

Update Time!

Once again... well looks like this topic isnt quite as hot on this forum as it was on orcworms.
Never the less, I will keep posting updates here, since a few of you are following my stories.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12R-WgYTh8SBh_zZsyjsoOIpQwxko9hmhlsl0eawNbLs/edit

So this isn't a joke, and you did write a horror story about ponies/unicorns...?

Grintendo. wrote:So this isn't a joke, and you did write a horror story about ponies/unicorns...?

Nope. Didn't joke. I'm as serious as can be.
And i did not only write one story.
Im working on my second as you can see. Its about halfway done.
By far not an as huge and epic tale as the first one, but adds some interesting info.

Grintendo. wrote:So this isn't a joke, and you did write a horror story about ponies/unicorns...?

I have to admit, this made me laugh...hard

My god, all along i thought this was a genuine troll...

Grintendo. wrote:My god, all along i thought this was a genuine troll...

Knowing that this is real now, would you consider reading my stories?
I assure you they are well written.

I know you love the whole pony thing but you should consider writing with different subject matter (keeping the blood, horror, and gore and shit, seeing as that is your style). I think, if the characters were not colorful horses, people would take the story much more seriously. Just my two cents.

PatrickFreed wrote:I know you love the whole pony thing but you should consider writing with different subject matter (keeping the blood, horror, and gore and shit, seeing as that is your style). I think, if the characters were not colorful horses, people would take the story much more seriously. Just my two cents.

I am a story teller and creativity is one of my great talents.
I think up stories all the time.
Just for now, I aim to the brony audience.
The Maledictum Insania legends are the first I ever wrote and am still writing.
More will follow one day, but for now, I need to write down the whole legend to get it out of my head.
If you were one of those actively watching the cartoon, you would understand that having colorful ponies does not necessarily mean they cant have epic stories too.

Nero Darkard wrote:

PatrickFreed wrote:I know you love the whole pony thing but you should consider writing with different subject matter (keeping the blood, horror, and gore and shit, seeing as that is your style). I think, if the characters were not colorful horses, people would take the story much more seriously. Just my two cents.

I am a story teller and creativity is one of my great talents.
I think up stories all the time.
Just for now, I aim to the brony audience.
The Maledictum Insania legends are the first I ever wrote and am still writing.
More will follow one day, but for now, I need to write down the whole legend to get it out of my head.
If you were one of those actively watching the cartoon, you would understand that having colorful ponies does not necessarily mean they cant have epic stories too.

I say you take Malectium Insaniaanpush it somewhereelse

No but take the story and just humanize it one day = possible money

thefluffyswan wrote:

Nero Darkard wrote:

PatrickFreed wrote:I know you love the whole pony thing but you should consider writing with different subject matter (keeping the blood, horror, and gore and shit, seeing as that is your style). I think, if the characters were not colorful horses, people would take the story much more seriously. Just my two cents.

I am a story teller and creativity is one of my great talents.
I think up stories all the time.
Just for now, I aim to the brony audience.
The Maledictum Insania legends are the first I ever wrote and am still writing.
More will follow one day, but for now, I need to write down the whole legend to get it out of my head.
If you were one of those actively watching the cartoon, you would understand that having colorful ponies does not necessarily mean they cant have epic stories too.

I say you take Malectium Insaniaanpush it somewhereelse

No but take the story and just humanize it one day = possible money

I think precisely the fact that it takes places in the mlp universe and is about ponies is what makes this story so successfull.
If i humanized it all, it wouldnt work anymore.
Cant make money out of it either since i would be violating copyright.